Blogging Theme Hard Rejected, I need feedback

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Hello guys, i need a feedback on my theme here fasel-demo.blogspot.com , i know that the theme typography is not very good for themeforest, but i need some advises in editing the theme, if you have time please act as a soft rejected reviewer.

Also i create anther theme which i haven’t submit yet jblog-theme.blogspot.com i need some feedback also here.

Thanks in advance.