Before this get rejected after waiting another 25 days...

Hi guys,

I have here something I put together this afternoon - this is the end to a corporate motivational song. It’s using cheap MIDI instruments and it hasn’t been mixed properly - yes, I know. What I want to know is, will this be too complex? I was given the hint that the first one I submitted was too chaotic. I just need to know if this also goes too far over the edge:

Thanks in advance