It’s pretty nice, but here’s what I thought of when listening to it:
• The funk chords sound great and professional, but maybe a bit too loud in the mix.
• When you switch to playing single notes on the guitar it loses energy, and it doesn’t sound as professional anymore. I would cut out the single note playing. Or improve it, add a bit of crunch and change the licks.
• After about 1 minute it starts to get very repetitive and it sounds like you’re just jamming over a backing track on a loop.
• The drums are too stale and repetitive.
Nice funk playing, but you could make this into a 1-minute track, cut the single note lines or improve them (play them over a backing guitar for example), liven up the drums and the bass a bit and it could get approved.