Audiojungle rejected feedback please?

I got rejected for my first track and wanted to know what feedback some of you had for the track if you don’t mind a quick listen.

Hi Josep!!
Your track is plenty of nice elements: love your sound, and arrangements… this is an idea from a popular song?
I’m still listening…, but while other colleages also take their opportunity to say something, I say a little of mine: something wrong happens in 0:28 with the harmonies of strings… I’m aware that maybe all you did it’s done on purpose, but I think that we have to take care of disonances and be respectful with clarity of chords… I’m sure for some curators this can be enough reason for rejection. … it’s just an idea, hope this can help. :smiley: