I can’t fault this, you’ve done an excellent job! Great snare sound, and really authentic sounding warm guitar tones, so much better than most rock stuff I hear on RF sites. I like the use of the octave on the lead hook in the chorus, that really hooks me!! So catchy
In my opinion this is awesome track, really. I agree with you about the clarity, also maybe you can try to pan some instrument a little on the right,it feels like there is more on the left. You will definitely get approve for this one.