Approved Or Rejected ? help me please !

Is this item will be approved or not ?

hi for me this is rather nice but judging by the degree of saturation of most markets and how this category is tough and demanding, not sure that it can make it for sale all the same … for me u have a nice base but indeed, the global style is not the most modern one of all… nowadays trendy logos are made of less “drawing” but rather shapes being subtracted to other using the pathfinder of illustrator. Though what u have here is quite. But, the thing is that the typo seems far from GR standards. Here expectations are high about it no matter where u post. At this stage what u have is not purely 100% matching if u ask me and rather classical and clean but plain … introducing touches of originality and some variations or font combos would be welcome