Any Advice B4 I upload this please?

Sorry to say, but this would be a 100% rejection.
There is no main theme recognizable. The Pizzicato is playing the same 4 notes the whole time. On one hand, everything os quantized too straight, so it sounds overall mechanic and artificial; on the other hand, there are also some timing problems around 1:05.
Listen to other songs that got approved and are the same genre you wanna write. Always imagine the possible usage of your music while composing.

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Hey Foxy. Thanks for the advice. Iā€™m totally new to orchestral composition so maybe I should study this more before I upload to AJ. Also, I never know how complicated to make the tracks. For example I have heard very simple tunes on AJ as well as some more complex orchestrations. I could add to this piece and try to make it sound less robotic but then I would fear that it would be too much for backround music. Anyhow, It is becoming clear to me that I need to study this type of composition a lot more.

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