Another rejection.

I really want to achieve the best quality. But, I can not understand the direction in which I need to be more attentive. Can anyone suggest why the rejection - is more about arranging, mixing or mastering? Please help with advice and direction where I need to try better?

Hi! I listened to your track, it sounds like 8 bits. Compare your track with other authors and you will understand what is wrong with your work.

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Hello !!!
I listened to your track and allowed myself to explore it. And here’s what I found: 1) too wide stereo (mid - little, side - a lot). Because of this, the sound of the instruments is smeared in space (like pudding around the edges of a plate). 2) there is no frequency balance. Frequencies 700 - 3500 Hz sound quiet, frequencies 20 - 150 Hz sound loud. Because of this, the music sounds muddy, indistinct, dirty. I present to your attention a video dark hip-hop_Edit where I tried to identify and correct the sound. Unfortunately, I don’t speak English well, and I can’t comment on my actions in this video, sorry. In the end, I will say that you need to move in the direction of mixing and mastering.
Good luck !!!
Sorry for my English.

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Thanks a lot for your answer! Very comprehensive and very understandable. My plugins are completely different, but the essence is clear. I will try.
PS: my english is not better at all, so don’t be sorry, I’m writing with google translator.)

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Hi dude, I listened to your track, for me the big problem is the 3D space and the arrangement, you have to add depth in the production phase, think of a simpler structure to cut for who will then go on to edit the commercials…mastering is ok