again rejected…
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hi u should post one by one the is easier to help u efficiently … one item, one thread …
let’s start with the saber gallery if u do not mind, there is more to say if u ask me … as for me in the first place i think that u have an issue of style … the style looks outdates and definitely having nothing in common with nowadays’ trends , where the pathfinder is much used and shapes are withdrawn fro others and so on … . This is globally too drawn or not enough , u kind of kept in the mid of the way , but if u opt for much more a drawn style then u need to have something much more worked out , so basically something with much more effects
plus, the typo is really super basic and far from standards here ,… this is flat, lacking originality, lacking variations and font combinations indeed. that would be better to add a tagline too so that u can more easily do just this and maybe giving a bit more breathing to the name of the company would be welcome but most importantly taking out the shadow is way better … let’s face it color combinations are not selling and really not harmonious and sometimes , some of them get u into trouble , trouble as regard to contrast more particularly …
for the lion logo well i think that the major problem is that u have too many details, logos are judged in small size here and too detailed logos bring bad previews to the table as details are flattened and usually ruin the visual part … it looks like kind of choking and crammed … in addition, the typo once again is very basic and u did not manage in this case to generate a true cohesion between illustration and texts so that people feel like there are naturally connected. Finally indeed, once again pls avoid the previews that are not selling like the green version which is not doing any favor to your preview image, not pushing reviewers to approve and which would not push potential customers into buying …
thank you so much bro.
u are welcome buddy , good work and good luck 