always rejected why? is this a very bad design?

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hi here are the things to improve

  • this is super busy a style
  • there are areas misbalanced with others in terms of occupation
  • the logo is misplaced (see z-shape reading process)
  • lack of breathing for some texts, including important ones like the phone number
  • rather flat hierarchy
  • tasteless typo so to speak lol - sorry for the pun - but there is nothing spicy out there at the moment
  • problems of elements crossing each other
  • issue of style and coherence of some items (swirls disconnected from the rest)
  • call for action button not attractive and popping out visually
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Yes, Right n2n44 answer
Good luck Regards.

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