AJ is keeping hard-rejecting me. Please if you can give me your feedback

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#1

Hey everyone,

I would love to hear your opinion on this track.

AJ is giving me general reason like
"After much consideration it has been decided that this item does not meet the general commercial quality standard required to be accepted on AudioJungle, unfortunately."

Please if you can take your time and listen it and give me your feedback, where I need to improve, or what is the reason that my productions are refused by AJ.

Thanks a lot for your time,
have a great days
kub


#2

I´m not at home but, maybe too much high frecuencies?


#3

hm…thanks a lot for this comment. however there are many other tracks with lot of high shakers and tamburines…It should have been definitely way too much high frequencies if they didnt want to approve it :frowning:

Anyone else feels the same or have some other suggestions?

many thanks!


#4

The song has good qualities and I like the general idea. I’m sure it could be successful with some improvements. You are clearly talented, so don’t give up!

Few things to improve in my humble opinion:

-The song is overly complicated. In this case, less is better. Do you really all this instrumentation? Do you really need those choirs? Another exemple: The modulation at 1:11, I think it’s too much. Keep in mind that corpo tracks should stay low profile. Buyers want your tracks to complement their work, not to take the front stage!

-You made some harmony mistakes: The biggest one is at precisely 0:25, you have a F minor chords that really doesn’t get along with your ostinato pattern. To fix this you might want to modify slightly your pattern at that point so it fits your chords. Ostinatos should always fits your chords.

-I have to agree with Manriquedelara about the high frequencies. The song sounds way too crisp and harsh. This is a mix and mastering issue.

keep up the good work, try to simplify your work a bit and you’ll be successful.

Cheers!


#5

I agree with @Fantasy_SFX.

• Too harsh, too much HF content.
• Too messy.
• Too dissonant.


#6

Hey :raised_hand_with_fingers_splayed:t3:

I think that the arrangement is a little bit poor and not so interesting matching nowdays standarts.

Try to listen top tracks here on AJ, especially in your favorite styles. Try to achieve that quality and sound. Your music must meet the profession standarts and have commercial value for video projects. Also I can recommend to learn on YouTube tutorials, courses more and keep going to write music. Write the music you would buy for yourself.
The quality of tracks on AJ is improving day by day so you have to match this and permanently work hard and learn I believe.
I wish you will get it!

Cheers :call_me_hand:t3:


#7

Hi, I have listened to your track and i like the main idea, but there are some dissonances (for example at the
second 0:27 where the piano is doing f diminished and i can listen as well the note C so you have a b9 dissonance) which
don’t make sense in this kind of music. Even If your idea was to play an F minor as a modal interchange, the sound/mood would still be far from the typical sound/mood of a Corporate track.

According to my taste the whole track is too compressed.

Keep on going!

Cheers


#8

Mute guitar - too bright (on the attack) Piano - you need less Velocity. The synth is too bright. don’t invent. “Aj” is not appreciated. The whole track was too aggressive. Need softer. I think so.


#9

Hey guys,

many thanks for your feedbacks and comments! It really keeps me motivated to improve my productions to meet AJ requirements.

You are all awesome :sunny:

Enjoy the day!