Again reject..., please help!

My tracks are being rejected all the time, help me figure out what to look for?

My last rejected track :

There are other tracks in the soundcloud account that also received a reject.

I will accept and I will be grateful for any harsh criticism.

sorry for my English)

accepted after rework !!!


nice song! also I think a problem was the AJ watermark was too low

maybe, but in the accepted version they even play quieter