Again I got hard rejected


#1

https://soundcloud.com/user-11301332/the-motivation Hello! I want to stop receiving hard rejected. To understand how the flow and tune in to this wave.


#2

Hello there. It’s kinda hard to say what was wrong here. Track is alright, not a hotshot, but nice average work. But let’s try it out.
First of all that comes to me is a lot of repetition despite you trying to vary it with other instruments, even bridge don’t helping to release a pressure of main melody. Try to work up in this way.
Probably that’s all i’m going to say. Dunno rly.
Anyway good luck mate! Keep up fighting and what is most important learning.


#3

Thank you for the detailed answer! Will consider the errors and will correct!


#4

An overabundance of the same type of music. But if someone makes a new sound they do not accept. paradox.