Advice PLEASE, I got rejected, mixing and mastering, and arrangement

I got rejected, mixing and mastering, and arrangement.
http://www.jaxsn.com/100secondsofLUST.mp3

I was going for a soulful jingle type, not the a,c structure.
I did not see anything wrong with the mix.
i will admit, i have other songs i feel with be accepted easier, but that’s besides the point.
tell me your thoughts please.

I don’t think AJ is quite the right market for this.

It’s also a little too repetitive. And, AJ strongly recommends against fading out.

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