Advice on a hard rejected track

Hi All

Please be honest about any reasons you may think of for the hard rejection of this track:


Musically everything is fine. But it seems Snares (toms) are loud. bulge against the general background.
In general, you are doing well. Wish you good luck next time.

Could be the strange combination of the instruments or the sounds. Some instruments sound a bit dated. But the production quality is just perfect.