About to submit my first track - feedback?

Hi All, I’m brand new to Audio Jungle and am about to begin submitting tracks. Below is 1 of the first tracks I hope to submit. I’d appreciate any comments/feedback on it, and if you think the performance, arrangement, production and audio quality are good enough for Audio Jungle. Thanks in advance - I appreciate the constructive criticism, even if harsh!

https://soundcloud.com/suntired/bp-test/s-XEc7I