4 tracks rejected! Please help!

Hello everyone!
I’m a newbie here. I’ve submitted four tracks last month and al of them were hard rejected. I understand, that I need to improve my tracks both in technical and creative way. I see some of my week places but definately not all of them. I would be so grateful for specific feedback from experienced AudioJungle authors.
Here two of my tracks. Please tell me, what is good in them (if it is) and what is not.



Anybody? 0_o