4/5 items at 0 sales. Any feedback on those please?!

Hello readers,
Well, even if i’m relatively new to envato marketplace I’ve submitted some of my best works since now and the sales won’t come so I’m really curious on what I’m doing wrong. 4 out of 5 items are still at 0 sales and I’m looking for ideas why xD.
I have a couple of questions if you are so kind to answer:
Are the description design a issue?
Are they really bad?
Do they look amateurish?
What would you change in my case?!

Below it’s the link to my profile where you will see some picture links to all of my works: https://codecanyon.net/user/lepaul

Many thanks for your time and oppinion and wish you a great day!

Maybe a decent presentation video would help. The video of you playing the game, is that how most people do it? I don’t want to sound like I’m knocking what you’ve done, but I’m just trying to imagine some kind of trailer for a AAA game where it’s a video of somebody’s phone shot in a darkened room.

Sure, nobody is selling AAA titles here and nobody has the same budgets as Ubisoft or EA, for example, but there’s no reason not to give it everything you’ve got. Can you add a live preview? Maybe you can export video from whatever software you make the games in? Add a nice background, some sound effects, a bit of music, text explaining features and creative editing… get people excited to play the game, plant the seed of what people can do with it etc etc.

That’s the way I see it anyway. But I’m no game maker. And I see that one of the top sellers is a racing game, so it’s probably not the item itself that is putting people off.

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Hmm…you made your point and you are right. I agree with you that it could be presented better xD.
Well thanks mate :slight_smile: that helped and decided to think better on how to redo the descriptions to my games to I’m still looking for opinions .2 heads are ALWAYS better than one and sure that there are things i’m missing .

Well i’ve revised my products description ahd hope it looks more professional :smiley:
QR Login - https://codecanyon.net/item/webcam-qr-login-system/17676203
RedRidingHood - https://codecanyon.net/item/red-riding-hood-twitter-fb-score-post-inapp-facebook-page-like-ads-enabled-/17651368
iBurgler- https://codecanyon.net/item/iburgler/17378631
Downtown Race - https://codecanyon.net/item/downtown-race-device-tilt-control-ads-enabled-endless-runner-obstacles-powerups/17466391

What do you guys think?