2 hard rejects! Dear musicians, please help me understand why.

Please leave your feedback for this 2 items, why rejects?

For the first track maybe you can try to add more dynamics and it sounds to me like your mixing is not well.
For the second track, for me it does not sound like “corporate”. You should pick your libraries more carefully, also the mix does not sound ok. I hope this was helpful to you.


thank you!